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Poetry Prose by wakemeup60

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How far gone
was I that I
didn't even
recognize
a tender touch,
a kind word?

So far gone,
flinching at the
slightest touch,
wincing at every
word you ever spoke;

…and you
never spoke
out of love…

Wrapped so tight
to the point
of numbness,
I couldn't feel
the pain inflicted.
My body is
still addicted
to your cold ways.

-Brian Shuffett/Kat Ward
-June 26th, 2010
This is my second collaboration with the über-talented Kat Ward. The first stanza was written by Kat, the second stanza by me, and the third was written by us both. She has also posted the piece here - [link] - and it would mean a lot to me that IF you're going to :+fav: it here, to follow the link and :+fav: it there as well!

Please refrain from indecent comments. If there is something you don't like about the piece, please say so in a decent manner. There is no need for personal insults just because you don't like someone's work.
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crimsha Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
you two did a great job on this!!!
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:iconbshuffett:
bshuffett Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
Thank you so much!
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JimmyJaszczurka Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010   Photographer
Feature [link]
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:iconbshuffett:
bshuffett Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
Again, thank you so much for the feature!
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Miss-Tbones Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
What a beautiful collaberation!Here's two talented minds at work! :clap:
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:iconbshuffett:
bshuffett Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
Thank you!
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Miss-Tbones Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Soo welcome! :)
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KJ-Illustration Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful collab! The imagery in this is breathtaking :heart:
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
Thanks hun! :glomp:
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RWolset Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Stunning, and thought provoking. Bits and pieces I can compare to myself that bring up memories of my past, contemplating the events gone by. Excellent piece!
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