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I recall the
night when
I no longer
felt at peace
when your
skin brushed
against mine.

Such a subtle
coldness lingered,
deterred my
hollow heart
from beating.

The Heaven
that dwelled
within us
simply died.
I could see
Hell from
my window;
I closed the
curtain and
said farewell.

-Brian Shuffett
October 17th, 2010
I miss her, but nothing lasts forever.

Gehenna: a place or state of misery
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CreekPrincess Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010   Writer
Wow. So beautifully written yet so painful to feel with you.
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
Thanks!

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TheDownpour Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
Wow - that is an amazing and moving piece - really emotional and atmospheric; especially in the second stanza. Fantastic piece :)
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
Thank you so much!
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TheDownpour Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
You're welcome :D It was a really good poem, I can't stress that enough.
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
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TheDownpour Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
:D :ahoy:
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Revelations5-5 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
Lovely as always! :heart: The title is alluring too.
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
Thank you so much!

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ArtSoul777 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2010
Powerful in it's honesty & emotion :heart:
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