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The rain ended abruptly,
stalled my heart from beating,
drenched in the memory of you.

Broken nights of sleep,
with painful visions
that will forever remind me
of who you really are.  

Contained in subtle misery;
an inability to forget that which
lingers in present dreams.

-Brian Shuffett
September 26th, 2011
I haven't written in so long and finally something just hit me. This is far from my best work, but it speaks of what I know, or that which I have felt on countless sleepless nights.
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PearlOfGreatPrice Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Makes me sad, but it's a beautiful poem. Sorry I haven't been posting/commenting in a while, been gone for a year! Hope you're well!
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May-I-RIP Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
Hey Brian, nice piece (as always). I too have not been writing in a LONG time, but also just got "hit" with the desire to do so again. I hope all is well.....
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
nice work. How are things going for you now?
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Thank you!

Not bad! I just started a new job about a month and a half ago.
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Cool. I'm in college so I'm a bit busy for a job.
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AElfrics-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That first verse is beautiful. Gorgeous, Brian. Absolutely gorgeous. xx
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
Thank you dear!

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AElfrics-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
always welcome! xx
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011   Writer
I've been there. the last stanza is particularly good.
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
Thanks Shane!

:ahoy:
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